Decided to give Dread a twin sister named Faux, so here she is in her beauty, it was easy drawing Dread's face, difficult with Faux but more pics will follow to show how I'm making alterations and changes (including improvements) to her face and will have a fully realized full body pic reference for you guys
I think you did well making her face look feminine compared to Dread's. Try re-positioning or re-sizing things like her nose or eyes if you are still not happy. For instance you can make her nose smaller and higher on her face and her eyes slightly bigger or slanted up more. There's usually subtly in the face of a character that makes a big difference.